Inn☺cence...

Inn☺cence...

A Poem by horizon

Wandering here and there 
No worry of the future
 Thinking in a different way 
Running without any fear of tumbling
 Finding happiness in little things 
Doodling on the paper
 Doing the stupidest thing but still looking adorable 
Trying and trying not accepting the defeat 
This is what innocence is....
CHILDHOOD ☺☺☺☺

© 2016 horizon



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chilhood the best part of our life....like it. keep going mam

Posted 1 Month Ago


horizon

1 Month Ago

Thank you sir ji...heard frm u after long time..my pleasure
Akash Sharma

1 Month Ago

mine too, good to see u here again
horizon

1 Month Ago

:):):):)me too..
Very lovely and caring words. In colorful and lovely form.

Posted 1 Month Ago


horizon

1 Month Ago

I am really in love the kids..it was just a small part towards them of mine..thank u though
WRITER-----------TYPEWRITER

1 Month Ago

Nicely done. Its really playful and have mood of happy playground.
horizon

1 Month Ago

:):):):)my pleasure
I like this. Smooth flow. Reads so well.
This is really nice...
GREAT JOB.....👌👌👌👌

Posted 10 Months Ago


horizon

10 Months Ago

thank you mam
There is a certain age that I adore in both boys and girls. It's the age when they are old enough to venture out on their own and form their own ideas and be full of life and excitement, but not so old that they're too cool for their parents. It's such a small window, but that's what this poem made me think about. One suggestion for us older folks, don't color your words yellow; I could barely read it!! :P Maybe orange??

Posted 10 Months Ago


horizon

10 Months Ago

Yup...sure...I'll change the colour definitely as soon as possible...thanks for your words...this ag.. read more
Childhood is all about not knowing what breaks this world apart. Innoncence is the key to humanity as well.

Very good thoughts.

Posted 10 Months Ago


horizon

10 Months Ago

yes very true
Ahhh, for naive yesterdays in carefree rapture! : )
Sooner, or later, we all give into the loss of innocence … it is unavoidable, and in my personal point of view, entirely missed in so very-very many ways.
For instance, I think i shall always crave real, deep, totally surrendered love, the way it felt for the first time. I've always looked, always hoped, always yearned and ached for it, but it just never came again, even after literally hundreds of tries … still, like you say, "never accepting the defeat".
I guess, in some ways, I'm still innocent, ya think?

Thank you, Dear Poetess — you've swooned my heart a gentle turn of yearning pain … see what I mean? ⁓ Richard : )

Posted 11 Months Ago


Vast experiences of childhood beautifully executed in few lines

Posted 11 Months Ago


horizon

11 Months Ago

thank you very much for your time reading...
horizon

11 Months Ago

Thank you Richard sir...it meant a lot to me...and we all are innocent deep in our heart...
Oh yeah childhood is another name for innocence. Nicely penned ☺

Posted 11 Months Ago


horizon

11 Months Ago

Thank you for reading...
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

You are welcome ☺
Little children can be naughty but above all they are full of charm, like this poem. You have this special way of bathing everyone in a glow of warm love, seeing only the best and kissing even the worst.

Posted 11 Months Ago


horizon

11 Months Ago

Hahaa...very well said...thank you for reviewing...but you know I really love kids...you can see the.. read more
Childhood..... reminds me of my poem on the same topic.. Too nice one as usual... I like the topic Innocence in an innocent way... Those were the best days of our lives ... No doubt in that...
miraculous poem once again!!!😊😉😘

Posted 11 Months Ago


horizon

11 Months Ago

I love kids....very much
Anindita Janhabee

11 Months Ago

me too!!! yaar... same here....

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Added on November 8, 2016
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