Falling leaves...with you

Falling leaves...with you

A Poem by horizon

I sat on the open ground at the top of the cliff
Greenery every where 
very feeble warmth of the sun rest on my face
the warm air of evening touched my cheeks 
i closed my eyes and took a deep breath 
when my eye lashes unfolded,i see you
your fragrance made my mind empty and i was unable to think anything
i looked into your eyes and you ran your hands in my black locks and freed them 
and my hair flowed with the air,they looked a little golden brownish because of the sunlight falling on them
i can see your perfectly brown eyes which always makes me feel shy
the way you look at me,is just breath-taking
we don't speak,there's nothing to speak
i rest my head on your shoulder and again closed my eyes feeling the air and warmth of the sun to fullest
you took my hand and we stand on the cliff 
you know i am afraid of height
you hold me tightly near your heart
i an facing the sun,your chin resting on my shoulder
leaves are falling from the trees appears as if golden petals are showered on us,for being TOGETHER
the fragrance in the air is soothing and light
you place a kiss on my shoulder,making me unable to stand
you hold me more tightly,possessing me
the sun turning pink,we saw the leaves falling and the sun sat at horizon.....


~I LOVE YOU S.S.~

© 2017 horizon



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So beautiful, my dear friend. Had watched the entirely romantic scene unfolding before my eyes with this great sense of longing within my heart... To be caressed by the sun... To finally know of a sweet fragrance... To be caught about the gentle tumble of leaves... Nothing can bring warmth to ones soul as effortlessly as the embrace of two loving arms. Where we are at our safest. Those moments when it seems as if all of nature, from the smallest of things to the largest, is a divine sign. Am going to cry a little bit now so please forgive me... But this is gorgeous and so full of devotion. As always, sweetheart, you leave me speechless.

Posted 10 Months Ago


horizon

10 Months Ago

you do understand the depth of my words...and your warm words just make me feel so happy that I've a.. read more
Beautiful Intentions

10 Months Ago

Aww! Lots lovin' too, sweets!
Everything is so beautifully moving through your words. One can sense this love, this light, the fragrance of the world, the sky in sunset hues. Wondrous.

Posted 10 Months Ago


horizon

10 Months Ago

thank you so very much for the reading...and understanding
My first reaction after reading this was "Wow. I haven't read a poem like this in a long time". The meaning is clear and very well shown. The emotion is brought out in quite a pleasent way as well :) Now I do feel like a couple things could've been better had they been worder differently. Nothing major though, and nothing that takes too much away from reading this. Overall, really nice job :) I'll be sure to subscribe and look forward to more from you :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


horizon

10 Months Ago

your words really appreciated me...thank you for reviewing...and yes I've to make corrections...I'll.. read more
Sounds like a perfect day to me despite your fear of heights, knowing someone is there to stop your fall. A beautifully painted picture of words and love here.

Posted 11 Months Ago


horizon

11 Months Ago

don't you think it's wonderful to have someone with you to hold you to fall...its love
horizon

11 Months Ago

don't you think it's wonderful to have someone with you to hold you to fall...its love
Lorry.

11 Months Ago

They usually just let me fall, but yes, it is :)
very beautiful deep. your words became emotion. it s have nive flow like universe. i simply love it.

Posted 11 Months Ago


horizon

11 Months Ago

Thank you..I listened to music when I was writing this...music inspired me
In English grammar, there are a few issues, but in your expressions of heartfelt emotion, beauty, moment, atmosphere, visual setting, and the sheer imagery of romance and tender love, it is stunningly perfect … ummm!
You've made an olde bard's heart dance and sing with the imagining of feeling and sharing such heavenly wonderment, and that is good poetry.
If you'd like any technical advice, just drop me a message … I'll be most happy to share what I know. :)

I thank you, my heart thanks you, my mind and soul thanks you, Little Poetess … hugs 'n blessings! ⁓ Richard

Posted 11 Months Ago


horizon

11 Months Ago

thank you soo very much sir...and it would be my privilege if you point out my mistakes...
Richard

11 Months Ago

As you wish, and you are so very welcome! : )
horizon

11 Months Ago

thank you sir
You're a sweetheart. This is a very sweet poem, and I like how you write from your heart. Keep writing and perfecting your art

Posted 12 Months Ago


horizon

12 Months Ago

thank u sooo very much for your appreciation...
So soothing poem... Felt like I lost in a wonderland... Falling like leaves, warmth of sun rays, made the scene alive.
Described everything perfectly with tingling words
In short "it is sweet and imaginary"

Posted 1 Year Ago


horizon

1 Year Ago

yes...it is a heartfelt... and we call it dreamagination...the dreams with imagination...
Ashish

1 Year Ago

Oh! Learnt new concept :)
Dreamagination
Starting with your love and ending with you horizon.....
The thing I always like in your writings is that in every piece of yours, you include your love......
What to say.... the way you describe nature....... I'm speechless with your dreams and the dreamaginations we created together... I hope you remember.... this is one........
i love this poem........like I love u my bestie........
ur poems are as wonderful as u r.....

Posted 1 Year Ago


Anindita Janhabee

1 Year Ago

The pleasure is indeed mine my bestie...
horizon

1 Year Ago

😘😘😘😘 exams exams....sorry for late reply
Anindita Janhabee

1 Year Ago

That's okay I knw u hv exams...
Very beautiful indeed! Choice of words is so excellent and description of the setup so good.



Posted 1 Year Ago


horizon

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much my friend...that is one of my dreams...

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Added on December 1, 2016
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