Holding on

Holding on

A Poem by horizon

There are sometimes when we feel as it is the end of everything. We loose hope n just fall back. Then the people who hold on to us becomes an important part of our lives...

There comes a phase when we feel completely lost
Broken relationships,loosing faith and confidence
Seems as if everything has fallen which was once can be called OURS
Makes us feel that we aren't worthy of anything anymore
Totally broken down
All the good things slipping out of the situation as the sand from hands
There's no other option other than to just have an heavy heart
Letting go some beautiful people of our lives
With whom we shared our soul
Completely lost
But there appears some words which lighten the positive thoughts
Takes us away from the dark to the brightest rays of HOPE
The encouraging words at that time have a very powerful impact
Makes us feel we are WORTHY,CAPABLE and most importantly STRONG
The people who stands with us gives us power at the time when we completely touch the depth of PAIN
The words of ENCOURAGEMENT helps to swin upwards and watch the sun
The PAIN,SORROW,REPENTANCE does not decreases but the thought that someone has BELIEF in you pushes you FORWARD

I'm really THANKFUL to GOD for gifting me such handful people those who will be
there for me to make me realise that I've a beautiful life and never letting me go down
Sometimes it is hard to come out of situations. But hope is always with us because of the BELIEF of people which HOLD ON to us...

© 2017 horizon

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hope, beliefs heavy words
but most important is self awareness and confidence good going again

Posted 3 Months Ago

Akash Sharma

3 Months Ago

see i would like to tell u something on this
if we r getting motivations from others, whomev.. read more

3 Months Ago

I too believe in that..that we should feel complete in ourself n our happiness is inside us..its jus.. read more
Akash Sharma

3 Months Ago

yes, gotcha mam
People can be wonderfully affirming - as also the source of ache and sadness. Your own spirit shines through this, your unquenchable hope and belief.

Posted 3 Months Ago


3 Months Ago

It has been a long time..thanks for the read..
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Life is easy when you are surrounded by beautiful people...

Nicely penned...

Posted 3 Months Ago


3 Months Ago

Thanks for the read friend
I love this work of urs and undoubtedly, I know I'm one of those persons who's always going to support you and speak you how wonderful life you've got and how much really you can enjoy it. Thanks for writing this one. You're brave and I'm lucky to have known you... Keep it up!!!

Posted 3 Months Ago

Who is this GOD fellow - and is he any good at swatting ICBMs?

Joking - faith is a wonderful comfort in times of strife. Well penned horizon.

Posted 4 Months Ago


4 Months Ago

Thank you for reading..:)

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Added on August 14, 2017
Last Updated on August 14, 2017




I am a happy soul...very emmotional..mould in every situation..i treat everyone equally..i am friendly and joyus.. life gives us many,many challenges which must be faced..the solution of problem is .. more..

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