Me Lost

Me Lost

A Poem by SoHopeful

I thought I'd be saved by now.

My eyes run from anger with the steady pace of tears.
My heart, miles away, is entangled in the life I long for.
Stranded, my bottled up "help me" notes never made it to shore.
I've run so far from the pain, the regret,the shame
I can't find my way back to myself.
"SOS's" washed away in the sand with my little love, got lost before I realized it.
So I trace the hate in my heart that reflects the gray skies
hoping one day they turn blue before I too wash away.
Forgotten, I'm left here alone: Lost.

© 2010 SoHopeful

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Relatable and intense. Really gives you a visual of the lost and forgotten hopes and dreams of a younger self. The anger and hate of a world that has denied that. Really good.

Posted 10 Months Ago

A strong, emotional and engaging write...
It's short but explains alot and gives meaning and lets us think more about it!!
Well done, keep it up Hope :))

Posted 11 Months Ago

WOWOWOWOWOWOOW!! I love this piece! What a powerful write!!! The emotion packs a punch with this one. I love that it takes me to a forgotten island of self...a feeling you describe with outstanding imagery! I enjoyed this! Well done! I agree that this piece did not get the reviews it should have!!

Posted 11 Months Ago

Very emotional. I love your play on words. Well done.

Posted 11 Months Ago

This is 7 years old and completely spectacular.

Posted 11 Months Ago


11 Months Ago

you are right ... quite the tramp through that soulheart X

11 Months Ago

strange no reviews ... but the again ... strange not X

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Added on March 5, 2010
Last Updated on May 15, 2010



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