This Is The Life

Sitting in a rocking chair

Hearing the water drip from the water garden

Every now and then, the wind warmly welcomes me.
Surrounded by nature and wild life
Letting the sun tan me
Birds singing there lovely afternoon songs
Watching caterpillars coming out of there cocoons, revealing there beauty.

But sadly, I have to say farewell to the past.

And say hello to the present.

Author's Note

Please click the tab down below!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HtPR4iSy27k

How I wish I could do that these days. ^__^
I know it isn't my best work, but I wrote it back in fourth grade to prove to my teacher on how good my writing actually is XD. Feedback is appreciated.

Reviews

[TroubledMindsX]

Geez! In 6th grade I was writing crappy 6 lined poems that made next to no sense..yet I still got an A? What? Anyways you've got some talent js

[Forever Hidden]

Me?
Talent? XD
Compare other people's work on here and mine look like it was picked out of a dumpster :p

[TroubledMindsX]

don't compare it to other people's this is amazing! you should be so proud of yourself!

[Felicity's Eve]

Very nicely written, my friend and 'sister'! :D

I love the theme here and it flows great!

P.s. In the 7th line, 'there' should be 'their'. Just a little heads-up ;)

[Forever Hidden]

YAY! WERE SISTERS NOW! :'D
Thanks! Maybe you should be my publisher and editor O.o
XD Lol I know you would never take the offer

[Felicity's Eve]

XD

[Admiral Kirk]

I like a coke, a patch of sunlight, and a comic book... That's perfection there, that's what it is... :P This poem makes me feel like I'm ten again, in fifth grade without a care in the world, scampering around in the sun. Not sure why. :P

[Admiral Kirk]

lol xD Mkay... Of course, when I was ten, I did realize the fact that I eventually would have a care in the world, but for the time being, I didn't care.

[Forever Hidden]

Lol so lucky dude :P
I'll enjoy being my age right now. XD
You should too O.O

[Admiral Kirk]

Lol XD Yes. Because I'm awesomely short! :D

[Forever Hidden]

XDDD So am i

[Forever Hidden]

Well sis measured me and I'm 3 inches shorter than her xD

[Admiral Kirk]

lol xD

[Forever Hidden]

I think your average for your height 0.o

[Admiral Kirk]

THANK YOU O.O
I'm also short. o.o

[Forever Hidden]

No your not!!!
Your 5"4 right? Be happy XD

[Admiral Kirk]

XD I love being short!!! XD

[Forever Hidden]

THAT IS NOT SHORT XP

[Admiral Kirk]

IT IS IN HIGH SCHOOLS O.O

[Forever Hidden]

IT'S NOT LIKE ANYONE WILL BULLY YOU :D

[Admiral Kirk]

HAHAHA, TRUE XD THEY BULLY ME FOR OTHER THINGS

[Admiral Kirk]

OH NO IT'S JUST ONE PERSON, MAN. O.O

[Forever Hidden]

0.o
I SEE! :D
That person be mean then :(

[Admiral Kirk]

Yes! :D
I KNOW RIGHT O.O Itsh okay though, I can just laugh at her ignorance. :D

[Forever Hidden]

XD I don't really give into what their saying if its only one person d:
But yeah you'll be taller in like a year or so xD
How tall are your friends? :o

[Admiral Kirk]

XD Lol, true...
Oh, I hope I don't grow much... lol xD
It varies. :P

[Forever Hidden]

You'll be 5"4 before you know it! :0 That's soo tall like you have no clue how tall that is man xD 8D

[Admiral Kirk]

But I am 5'4"! :o
Lol xD It's tall in sixth grade... xD

[Forever Hidden]

Excuse me.
5"4 and a HALLFFF
MAKES SUCH A BIG DIFFERENCE XP
XDD My sister was the tallest person in her class until last year haha

[Admiral Kirk]

Ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!
Lol xD Really? Lol I'm average, I guess, but average is short here, man. xD

[Admiral Kirk]

XDD What was it? xD

[lee von cleef]

I was my best at twelve, I think you should say hell to the past because time is a river with lots of circles.

[Forever Hidden]

Thank you for the review.

[lee von cleef]

I ment hello

[Sami Khalil]

The wind warmly welcomes me... Very poetic... Good job.

[Forever Hidden]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are quite welcome...

[Toni Blackerby]

i love this

[Forever Hidden]

Thanks. I think.

[Dark Rider]

First, take you for dedicating it to me. You didn't have to do that. Second, such a lovely poem. You truely are good at this sort of writing.

[Dark Rider]

I'm sure that's not true, but thanks anyway!

[Forever Hidden]

No really. All my friends are at school. Other than my family, your the only one. We shall carry this conversation on to my profile!

[Dark Rider]

Yes, lets. :)