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Waves

Waves

A Poem by Ashley
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How I see, hear, and feel the waves.

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When waves crash against the rocks they welcome you,
Waves make the sandy desert a place for fun,
Each wave vibrates the ground with force,
When you leave the beach always expect a wave goodbye.

© 2017 Ashley



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Ashley
I think its an okay poem. If you see any issues, please inform me.

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Interesting observation of waves. Nice idea put into words. Yes We can have fun in sand . That's next good one. Yes there is always good bye . I really like it. I will be make longer and maybe observe how each wave is different if they have human feelings . When they are give birth and when they die. There is so many options what can be done. But well done.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Le fleurs enfer

11 Months Ago

Or 50 maybe. I don't really find how old are very important. That's just age of flesh but mind can.. read more
Ashley

11 Months Ago

True, gotta go bye!
Le fleurs enfer

11 Months Ago

Yeah me to bye.



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Takes me right there, this does. The rough and rampant waters - the calm, serene, glistening 'plains' like a hundred diamonds scattered here and there. Most beautiful sight!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Like you I am a 'lover' of the sea and all it entails. Could sit for hours and just watch the ebb and flow of tides.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Ashley

10 Months Ago

Thanks! lol :D
I love this poem. Everything that has to do with the beach naturally attracts me and I think you did a good jo b

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashley

11 Months Ago

Thanks Micleale for the review! Means a lot! Glad you liked it. :D
Interesting observation of waves. Nice idea put into words. Yes We can have fun in sand . That's next good one. Yes there is always good bye . I really like it. I will be make longer and maybe observe how each wave is different if they have human feelings . When they are give birth and when they die. There is so many options what can be done. But well done.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Le fleurs enfer

11 Months Ago

Or 50 maybe. I don't really find how old are very important. That's just age of flesh but mind can.. read more
Ashley

11 Months Ago

True, gotta go bye!
Le fleurs enfer

11 Months Ago

Yeah me to bye.

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Added on September 15, 2017
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