Waves

Waves

A Poem by Ashley
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How I see, hear, and feel the waves.

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When waves crash against the rocks they welcome you,
Waves make the sandy desert a place for fun,
Each wave vibrates the ground with force,
When you leave the beach always expect a wave goodbye.

© 2017 Ashley



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Ashley
I think its an okay poem. If you see any issues, please inform me.

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Interesting observation of waves. Nice idea put into words. Yes We can have fun in sand . That's next good one. Yes there is always good bye . I really like it. I will be make longer and maybe observe how each wave is different if they have human feelings . When they are give birth and when they die. There is so many options what can be done. But well done.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WRITER-----------TYPEWRITER

1 Month Ago

Or 50 maybe. I don't really find how old are very important. That's just age of flesh but mind can.. read more
Ashley

1 Month Ago

True, gotta go bye!
WRITER-----------TYPEWRITER

1 Month Ago

Yeah me to bye.



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Takes me right there, this does. The rough and rampant waters - the calm, serene, glistening 'plains' like a hundred diamonds scattered here and there. Most beautiful sight!

Posted 1 Week Ago


Like you I am a 'lover' of the sea and all it entails. Could sit for hours and just watch the ebb and flow of tides.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Ashley

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks! lol :D
I love this poem. Everything that has to do with the beach naturally attracts me and I think you did a good jo b

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashley

1 Month Ago

Thanks Micleale for the review! Means a lot! Glad you liked it. :D
Interesting observation of waves. Nice idea put into words. Yes We can have fun in sand . That's next good one. Yes there is always good bye . I really like it. I will be make longer and maybe observe how each wave is different if they have human feelings . When they are give birth and when they die. There is so many options what can be done. But well done.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WRITER-----------TYPEWRITER

1 Month Ago

Or 50 maybe. I don't really find how old are very important. That's just age of flesh but mind can.. read more
Ashley

1 Month Ago

True, gotta go bye!
WRITER-----------TYPEWRITER

1 Month Ago

Yeah me to bye.

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Added on September 15, 2017
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