Gray.

Gray.

A Poem by Lexi Nicole
"

I search for your hand and the light of day, but everything's gray.

"

Lost
And scared
In this mist
I roam with no thought of where I’m headed

 

Thickening fog surrounds me in this night
So alone
Helpless
Lost

 

There is neither darkness nor light in gray
I trek through the unfamiliar of gray
I search for your hand and the light of day
But I can find nothing, everything’s gray

 

Dull
Plain
Feared
Gray.

© 2009 Lexi Nicole


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Lexi Nicole
Written for a contest. Comments? Crit?

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a wandering chug--that's how it reads. excellent job. tovli

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really liked this but i also found it a bit repetive as well. The last 2 ines of the third stanza are my favorite as well.


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked it, it flowed pretty nicely but I also found it slightly repetitive, I love the last two lines in the third stanza though :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 15, 2009

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