Madrugada, Ven / Dawn, Come

Haiku written in Spanish. English translation with it. The stars call the sun...

La luna brilla
Estrellas llamen el sol
Madrugada- ven.

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The moon shines
Stars call the sun
Dawn- come.

 

Author's Note

I had to write a haiku for Spanish extra credit. I really liked how this came out, and I'm writing a few more to add into the project. The syllables don't work out in English, but I still like how it sounds in both languages.

Reviews

[Jolie Blossom]

My favorite spanish word is la luna.... I think its very beautiful in the haiku. And I love the imagery :) nice job!

[Archia]

It's sounds so beautiful in Spanish, it doesn't matter that I can't understand it. And in English it sounds wonderful (who cares if the syllables don't work). It so nicely shows the transition from night to day, wonderful.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning Haiku!

[Brianna Brie]

Enjoyable Haiku...got to love them. They are just a snippet of creativity!

[Marlena]

I like it, it's cute XD Can if be considered a haiku and a half? I mean, since the syllables don't work out in english XD lol baaaaad joke great job tho XDDD