Aguaceros / Rain Showers

Spanish haiku, also translated into English.

Lluvia cae
Das una caminata
Bajo gris nubes

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Rain falls
You take a walk
Under grey clouds

 

Author's Note

Syllables don't match up in English. I'm too fond of this one, but I do like the image of walking in the rain. ^^

edit: Thanks to Aviera for noticing the typo <3 It's fixed now <3

Reviews

[Archia]

This is another lovely one. I love how it makes the rain seem beautiful, even though there's not particularly any words to point out that the rain is like that; it's in the feel of it.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning Haiku!

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning Haiku-7 contest!

[Tallulah]

love it and thanks u just reminded me that I have to do my spanish x-tra credit. I loove you oodles.
Wuffles you,
Tallulah

[Aekmy]

Ooo I like this one very much.

[Tanya]

I love this, both in english and spanish. Mostly spanish, partly becuase i don't get to read much of spanish poetry.

[Marlena]

Same, the rain is amazing lol so relaxing! I can't wait for the next shower, I'm gonna grab Sarah and dance in it ^^ by the way, shouldn't it be "walk" not "walked"?