Never forget you (senryu)

Never forget you (senryu)

A Poem by hcarson
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Another practise piece

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Never forget you (senryu)

Never forget you
You are important as well
So many forget

© 2016 hcarson



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hcarson
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Simple words but I think very encouraging for a person who is down in life... I believe it's very strong and assuring...

I would advise you to find something for the last line, more catchy something... But as you said it's a practice piece so it goes really well... You'll get there...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

2 Years Ago

Yea i get you..i was going for a kind of bleak feel to the ending if u get me as to forget yourselfi.. read more



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Simple words but I think very encouraging for a person who is down in life... I believe it's very strong and assuring...

I would advise you to find something for the last line, more catchy something... But as you said it's a practice piece so it goes really well... You'll get there...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

2 Years Ago

Yea i get you..i was going for a kind of bleak feel to the ending if u get me as to forget yourselfi.. read more

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hcarson
hcarson

cardiff, barry, United Kingdom



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