I'll heal in my own time

You say " get over it you'll live." 

Well you weren't there 

 You haven't seen What I seen 

 You haven't been through 

What I have been throught 

 I'll heal in my own time

 I can't when You say heal 

And when I heal 

I'm not Going to be your little girl Anymore

 You say, "where's my sweet little stephanie?" 

Well Im sorry to say that sweet innocent

 Little girl died when it all started 

You will never see her again

 And you know  its your Fault

 you should of done something

you knew What he was doing 

 When it happened 

You are just like him now

Leave me alone; I don't need you anymore

So long, don't come back

You are not forgiven."

Reviews

[Moebia]

I love the powerful emotion expressed here, although there are some things I want to address, and this totally constructive criticism, not meant to attack or offend!
There are grammatical errors, such as some capitalized words that I am wondering as to why they are, as well as the "It's", and the "Your" from the last line. (Change it to you're).
Anywho, I feel like this could be formatted a bit better. Although it is fee verse poetry, it does lack a sort of flow. (NOT rhyme, and believe me there is a difference).
For instance, in the last stanza, you could rephrase it to flow better like this:
"You are just like him now
Leave me alone; I don't need you anymore
So long, don't come back
You are not forgiven."
Also, it feels as though in the last stanza everything is being conveyed too quickly. But that is based on every reader differently, I suppose.
Not a bad poem. It has great potential.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with the logic in the poem. We must heal at our own pace. Somethings can't be forgiven. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[child of God]

Thank you for reading and the nice reviews

[Laura Harrison]

Healing takes time, but sometimes time is all we need. Nice write.

[child of God]

thank you ...

[Sami Khalil]

Let the healing begins...A wonderful poem...:).................

[child of God]

Thank you for your time I'm glad you like it

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).................

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well stephanie you are getting better at this writing thing girl:)Your emotions come across very well and I see that you are pissed,as you have every right to be if the person who was supposed to protect you let you be hurt.Writing will help I promise .

[child of God]

Thank you for taking time to read my poams I'm glad you like them
P.s you are right I was pissed when I wrote this and

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome stephanie and you keep at it you will be fine:)

[Daniel Sala]

Wow, another solid poem from your hand. This one is a lot tidier with regard to grammar and spelling than previous works, great. The fresh honesty and directness match the lucidity of the ideas. A beautiful title too.

[child of God]

Thank you I try it took me some time I think this one was the hardest and longest one

[Daniel Sala]

Thank you, Stephanie.