Save me

She is my bad side and she gots me in a cell that I can't figure out

I'm tired of being the fragile one
The one that is sensitive
I know it’s hard to
See the real me
Through her the sad
Broken me but trust
Me past her Is a
happy strong
Me I am in there
Locked up and
I cannot find
The key help
Me for I want
Out I don't
Like this
Sad girl
That kidnap
Me and took
Over my Life
she Is hurting
Me and I'm stuck
Watching From the
Inside Help For
I'm a prisoner
Of pain stuck
Locked in
This horrible
Place help
Me escape
She is hurting
Me and my friends
Save me from
My prison

Reviews

[wordman]

and a white knight with shinny armour rode into your life
and saved the damsel in distress,and they rode off into the sunset

[girlwithwonders]

a prisoner of your own thoughts and pain... I feel you but always remember life goes on

[Daniel Sala]

What a profoundly conscious piece regarding self-awareness and our actions which not even we can understtand at times, shooting ourselves in the foot. As ever, you express difficult ideas with clarity, and bring a positive ending filled with light thanks to the nicely-worded self-awareness.
We are like "ghosts" and can walk through psychological "walls", something we do as soon as we are ready to when we see the sunlight on the other side and know we deserve to bask in its warmth. A great, deep poem, Stephanie.

[child of God]

Thank you....

[BubblingMe]

Sad but I really like it

[funsized fairy]

I like it. slowly your are clawing your way out of the bars.

[child of God]

Yes I'm get out ill get out if its the last thing I do I'm not leting her stay one the out side I'm going to get out and lock her in forever hopefully I will win

[funsized fairy]

You will