Purplesky

Off the top of the head poem

I really like a purple sky

one my eyes can see

but purple sky had no wedding or little child to be

Purple sky beautifully uncloudy

now rainy days no more,

love brought the suns shine to matrimony door

Reviews

[melancholia skies]

Lovely written. thought some things were choppy with the scheme, it was still a lovely read. One question though, in there title there... Did you mean to spell it "Pruplesky"? Because I'm just curious, not criticizing. Because I've seen very smart writers spell something wrong to manipulate a poem's/story's/book's meaning, and they often turn out very well done, like this one naturally. This feels like a story to me aswell, a story of a woman and her beautiful, purple sky alone, and then something turns her life around be it her purple sky or not, and she finds beautiful happiness in love, and with her beautiful purple sky. :)

[Namrata]

"but purple sky had no wedding or little child to be" - This line is so pristine and independent in this poem . Well Penned, beautiful imagery for one to envision.

[Lepadah]

I like the off the top. The spontaneity and simple beauty of this poem works.

1 peace lepadah

[Lyrical Love]

Interesting choice of words.
There is a soft rhythmic flow. It seems that (for me)
when a nice piece comes to mind like this
go back later-and embellish the thought.
That makes a good poem a great one.Purple is a very royal color, and mention
a relationship that leads to marriage-again a very honored union.
This has very nice bones.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Purple skys and matrimony, brought sunshine, interesting writing. It has a mysterious feel. Words work well together.