No one remembers me

I have stayed away from my family for the past six years coz of my studiesin a hostel. There have been days when I was feeling low and I wanted to talk to someonemy family, a friend or friendsanyone. Many days in fact. And many timeseither I couldnt

No one remembers me…

 

One small smile,

or a wave of hand,

is enough to say hi!

 

A simple message,

or a single call,

is enough to say hi!

 

But, the days pass by

and my ears are tired.

 

Not a single call,

not a single letter…

Did they forget me?

 

No one around to talk to me,

no one goes from or comes to me.

 

Not a single call,

not a single letter…

Did they forget me?

 

The days pass by

and my ears are tired…

 

I am all alone over here,

and, no one remembers me.

 

Reviews

[smalltownsympathies]

Strong ending. Great .

[there is no more from m..]

amazing
truly amazing

[Coyote Poetry]

Someday we feel alone. Just one friendly glance or kind face. Your poem is sad and powerful. Could feel the loneliness and desire for someone to care. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[shythatway]

Oh, I could see emotion in this.. Just that line 'no one goes from or comes to me'. They have to come, to be able to go from you. Not something one would usually think about, and for some reason that told me something. I hope you're back home now. *smile* Thanks for sharing.

[a]

This isn't very inspiring and emotional, a simple text. It could be made more colorful (darker, desperate, deeper) by adding some metaphores, adjectives. This just didn't bring any emotion, but the theme is serious and urgent. We all once in a while feel this way, It's devastating.
Thank you!

[Constance L. Hartwell]

A hostle ey? Wow. I loved this poem. I've never been in a hostle but I know how it feels to be alone. You captured the essence of lonliness quite well. Kudos

[Vaishali..^_^]

you're not at all dear..:(i have also felt it many times.....we have to go through sometimes in life but it is fine!its a part of it..!

[Bud]

You're not alone. :) I've felt this before. I like this poem.

[Craig Froman]

Beautifully bittersweet, painfully moving through a heart lonely and in need of affirmation... remembrance... Oh the ache for recollection...

[emma]

This is a very simple and honest poem, and yet extremely powerful. I have often felt like this and then I tell myself that maybe they are feeling the same way, and wondering why I haven't called and if maybe I've forgotten them.