Bing Living

We do have wisdom but do we live right way, are we true to ourselves !

When you walk and allow not your walk affect the sanctity of your mind,

When you dream and allow not the dream to let reason prevail;

When you sleep and allow not the sleep to afflict,

When you think and allow not the thought to find cognizance,

When you love and allow not the love to be tamed,

When you speak and allow not speech hold prejudice,

Then you die and allow not your life question you,

“When in life did you ever live?”

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. I am speechless. Though provoking question. In life we all talk about days when we feel like dying and all. When did we ever live? That's a question one should be able to answer.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

I love this! It's short, but pretty inspirational.

Then you die and allow not your life question you,
“When in life did you ever live?”

I really liked that last part, it really tied up the whole piece and it was a great ending. I believe that a lot of people could learn from this. They don't have to try to have a perfect life and never do anything fun.. They need to learn to live a little, and you expressed that beautifully.

[hussain]

Thanks for the review amanda !

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

No problem(: