Stretch Marks

They've taken over my skin

And so I know there's no return anymore.

Even if things get better once again,

The marks won't ever let me forget

The control I failed to have.

I'll never part ways with the past now...

'Cause he's got an advocate specialized in

Putting me d

                     o

                        w

                            n.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Negative people. Need a boot to the butt. Honest and true words made the reader to tell. You are fine. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kelly Scheppers]

I like it. Stretch marks and all. Cool ending!

[Planet x]

you will change your past

You already did , you wrote this brave poem

[wordman]

sad write,just pull your self back up and tell him good bye