All the Things

All the Things

A Poem by Frankie Nguyen

All the things

you may
irritate me to no end
with your gaming
make me wonder
make me mad
so mad I want to pull
my own hair out
piss me off
test my patience
annoy me half to death
with Chuck Norris jokes
and light saber apps
no matter what
at the end of the day
it's the

kisses and hugs
smiles and laughs
the calls and texts
messages and posts
the good and the bad
the irritation and madness
the annoyance and jokes
that make me say

you know what world
that's my best friend
my world
my life
my love
my boyfriend
and I wouldn't change
one thing about him.

© 2010 Frankie Nguyen


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I agrree,t he truth of every relation in Earth. I love the ending, it shows how strong is the relation is! Its so cute, and the clolour changing of this poem relly coperate with your poem!( but try not to use yellow, bit of hard to see)
Great Job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think this poem rings true for everyone in a relationship! You have to take the good things and the bad and love them both! Very well written poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I liked how you wrote both the positives and the negatives and the colours really made this poem stand out well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This was really cute! I love the color scheme of this poem; it made it a lot more interesting. The only criticism i would give is that this poem is really jumpy. I don't know if it's just me, but it was a tiny bit difficult to read in the beginning. Great poem though!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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