My Brain Is Scattered

Around             Place                        Lurks          Find            Place               Do           Do            Monster

                   This             Confusion                To               It’s              What             I            The                   Near.

 

 

To                       Me                To             Better             To               Stars                Beyond            Wait.

              Take              Away              A                 Place           The                  And                     I

 

 

The                          is                 I                          Him               Brain                   I                  I'm                              

            Monster            Here         Welcome                 My                  Ignited            Smile             Gone.

                         

Reviews

[Blue Belle]

Different structure which is neat. Take Care! Stay Strong! :)

[TLK]

Excellent work in formatting the text to get that effect.

[patricia]

I like the way you set this out. I felt the impending fear you expressed, and the sense of relief you seem to portray at its end. Nice write. Enjoyed.

This was very different. I like the presentation of this. However, I do not like the conclusion that much. IT makes the point hard to understand overall. Great topic nonetheless and great job.