Moonlit night

Shivering quivering moonlit night

Hold your lover closeand tight

Love them forever,forever and a day

Promise them you'll always stay

Author's Note

I need help finishing it in a non-violent way....XD it's hard for me!!!!!

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

I think it's fine as is. It makes a clear and simple statement about being with your lover on a moonlit night. What could be better?