when i cry

when i cry

A Poem by i am LiLy
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i'll never be ok

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© 2017 i am LiLy



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Your poetry, your art, conveys hope. It's the human spirit in a rhythmic language, packed with raw, intense emotions. Your writing tells the world hope is alive, despite "the s**t from my existence." Your writing also projects strength and resilience. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

3 Weeks Ago

wow......thank you......I just suffer bad suicidal depression and evil voices that have torn my life.. read more
Robert Ray

3 Weeks Ago

I know your strong. Your strength shines through in your poetry. Keep the faith. :)



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Seems like you're lost and despaired. The same room of depression you are in I am there too and we're not alone.it's a crowded place.however you are feeling we all feel it together

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

3 Weeks Ago

I would never go into a room that busy😁I would walk away and sit alone under a tree......
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Your writing is so powerful, full of genuine emotion. The reader cannot help but be drawn in. Please keep writing and creating!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

3 Weeks Ago

thank you my friend......it's funny you see it as creative....to me it's just nothingness and empty .. read more
Your poetry, your art, conveys hope. It's the human spirit in a rhythmic language, packed with raw, intense emotions. Your writing tells the world hope is alive, despite "the s**t from my existence." Your writing also projects strength and resilience. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

3 Weeks Ago

wow......thank you......I just suffer bad suicidal depression and evil voices that have torn my life.. read more
Robert Ray

3 Weeks Ago

I know your strong. Your strength shines through in your poetry. Keep the faith. :)
You should write a play. ....a poetic play of sorts, for your poems are so dynamic, profound, and dramatic, and feel every word and every word sings its heart out. Wow!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

3 Weeks Ago

thank you again for reading and commenting..your comments are always well appreciated my friend.

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Added on December 24, 2017
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i am LiLy
i am LiLy

United Kingdom



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i'm lost but try to create and express my existence somehow. i feel broken and numb but I write because it stops my life ending. i record sounds and audio that i feel like is somehow between sound .. more..

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