betrayed

betrayed

A Poem by i am LiLy
"

never trust or believe anyone....you can only trust yourself and your evil

"

© 2017 i am LiLy



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whew! brutal ..brilliant image with the spider .. oh man! desperate and dies from emptiness in the dusty corner..wow does that ever speak to me .. so much reminded of mr. dark poet himself...E.A. Poe ... "...my empty shell, my dead empty well" brilliant says i ..you have a very keeps it real talent in your poetry .. so glad we met Ms. Lily .. so brutal ..takes my breath away
E.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

3 Weeks Ago

you are kind....

I just write to stop me self harming and my suicidal thoughts......i.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Weeks Ago

i know Lily ..you shared that with me ..and my heart is extended to you for sure :(



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WOW some stuff right now, powerful too. you express yourself well.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hadenuff

2 Weeks Ago

I am very sorry. Is it okay if I keep you in my prayers.?
i am LiLy

2 Weeks Ago

sure .....cool

that's not my thing but I never disrespect anyone's beliefs........and.. read more
hadenuff

2 Weeks Ago

No problem
Hard and desperate words. Fighting demons and accepting them. Easily done. Your words made the reader believe your thoughts and your emotions. Thank you dear Poet for sharing your words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

2 Weeks Ago

huge thanks
Coyote Poetry

2 Weeks Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.
This poem reminds me of your poem, "whats in the box." You describe an existence within your head and soul only, nothing outside. Sleep is an escape, and when awake (a relative state of consciousness), darkness consumes, where only demons accompany and comfort. This is among the darkest of your poems, and leaves the reader empty, wanting to run from that dark place.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

2 Weeks Ago

I have an allowance of sleeping tablets and sedatives......a lot really.....
they come with m.. read more
whew! brutal ..brilliant image with the spider .. oh man! desperate and dies from emptiness in the dusty corner..wow does that ever speak to me .. so much reminded of mr. dark poet himself...E.A. Poe ... "...my empty shell, my dead empty well" brilliant says i ..you have a very keeps it real talent in your poetry .. so glad we met Ms. Lily .. so brutal ..takes my breath away
E.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

3 Weeks Ago

you are kind....

I just write to stop me self harming and my suicidal thoughts......i.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Weeks Ago

i know Lily ..you shared that with me ..and my heart is extended to you for sure :(
Deep words, i was there, and i know that the hate can bring you power, but trust me, there are a better way, the trick is in worry for the others but dont worry for what they think, you are yourself, and nobody can change that, continue, dont isolate, that's our worst enemy. i hope the life give you the best, because you deserve it, just like everyone.. cheer up! :D

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

3 Weeks Ago

don't worry about me......I know my destiny and I'm happy to face it......

thank you .. read more
deep really deep I like it

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

3 Weeks Ago

yeah...my evil demon inside me shouts garbage so I write it down.....it's stops me cutting again (I'.. read more
Your hate can make you a stronger . Own space is very important to feel your self and your desires and dreams. Your words are powerful and strong cause you speak about your self . When we are betray by someone we feel like empty broken shell. But after while there is new source of our re born . Our hate and resistance . We can really became friends with our true self. Good luck on your jouney

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

3 Weeks Ago

you are kind....thank you so much for reading my words.
Chaotic poetic

3 Weeks Ago

You welcome you write very important words.

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Added on December 26, 2017
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i am LiLy
i am LiLy

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i'm lost but try to create and express my existence somehow. i feel broken and numb but I write because it stops my life ending. i record sounds and audio that i feel like is somehow between sound .. more..

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