whats in the box

whats in the box

A Poem by i am LiLy
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i will be happy the day that its me in the box

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© 2017 i am LiLy



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oh my goodness .. that quote from the movie 7 is thrown about in our household routinely .. and oddly enough we have a bit of a chuckle over it ..i guess it Brad's delivery that makes it so. :))
of course that has nothing to do with your poem... which is very emotive ..the heart wrenching pain is palpable ..and is see something else there...men are "fixers" ... now i'm not saying your poem has anything to do with men ..but we are fixers at heart and have a very hard time just listneing ...not trying to fix anything ..just to sit ..and listen ..and love that one we are with .. i think perhaps that is something that has been missing for your protagonist .. depression, suicidal thoughts and the desire to be free from all the pain is a real epidemic in our nation i think ... no matter the reasons .. but it needs a voice and you have given it loud and clear..this poem really makes me sit up and listen ...so thank you Lily .. for this dark and honest expression .. the vulnerability really touches me ol' heart
E.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

3 Weeks Ago

it's cool hun.....I was just surprised....
I was interested to know which line it was you spo.. read more
i am LiLy

3 Weeks Ago

it's funny......I have waited a day or so for you to answer to tell me which line it was.......I was.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Weeks Ago

ahahahaha love and peace dear friend...so happy to be getting to know you with each poem ..blessings.. read more



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Painful words and thoughts. You made the reader believe and understand the situation. Another old wise saying. Push a dog into a corner. May bite you.
Thank you dear friend for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

3 Weeks Ago

thank you.
Coyote Poetry

3 Weeks Ago

You are welcome my friend.
You, my friend are a philosopher. All that's happening to you is happening to you for a reason, and your writing is your means of sublime expression that makes the world think, WOW!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

3 Weeks Ago

I used to think things happened for a reason......but then I get crap like this morning where I've h.. read more
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emipoemi

3 Weeks Ago

you never know, but you do have a sublime gift, which you should learn how to use for the betterment.. read more
My first impression... Total darkness, a soul out of reach, out of touch, sinking below humanity. The reader is left with a sense of total helplessness, watching the abyss take another soul. Unlike some of your other work, I don't see any glimmer of hope in this one.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

3 Weeks Ago

there is no glimmer of hope in anything my friend.....we are all heading to the same hole..... you'r.. read more
Robert Ray

3 Weeks Ago

Well, while I'm grassy side up, I'll enjoy it! :)
oh my goodness .. that quote from the movie 7 is thrown about in our household routinely .. and oddly enough we have a bit of a chuckle over it ..i guess it Brad's delivery that makes it so. :))
of course that has nothing to do with your poem... which is very emotive ..the heart wrenching pain is palpable ..and is see something else there...men are "fixers" ... now i'm not saying your poem has anything to do with men ..but we are fixers at heart and have a very hard time just listneing ...not trying to fix anything ..just to sit ..and listen ..and love that one we are with .. i think perhaps that is something that has been missing for your protagonist .. depression, suicidal thoughts and the desire to be free from all the pain is a real epidemic in our nation i think ... no matter the reasons .. but it needs a voice and you have given it loud and clear..this poem really makes me sit up and listen ...so thank you Lily .. for this dark and honest expression .. the vulnerability really touches me ol' heart
E.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

3 Weeks Ago

it's cool hun.....I was just surprised....
I was interested to know which line it was you spo.. read more
i am LiLy

3 Weeks Ago

it's funny......I have waited a day or so for you to answer to tell me which line it was.......I was.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Weeks Ago

ahahahaha love and peace dear friend...so happy to be getting to know you with each poem ..blessings.. read more

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Added on December 26, 2017
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i am LiLy
i am LiLy

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i'm lost but try to create and express my existence somehow. i feel broken and numb but I write because it stops my life ending. i record sounds and audio that i feel like is somehow between sound .. more..

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A Poem by i am LiLy