sometimes in those eyes

sometimes in those eyes

A Poem by i am LiLy
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i have mentioned on here before that i had a partner i thought was the one some time ago.....but i destroyed our relationship through my dark evil twisted self destructive ways.... this is about her

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© 2018 i am LiLy



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wow so very emotional and deep.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

6 Months Ago

thank you my friend
This is the kind of poetry we live for!! That's the spirit. Your musicality in just a couple of places is a bit off, but it's overall beautifully constructed, and simply sublime in imagery, narrative, and many other qualities! Well done!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

6 Months Ago

I find it difficult to write to fit what is considered...correct....

I hate it when t.. read more
emipoemi

6 Months Ago

And it's a good technique. It can be very therapeutic! And it helps. We're all here for you when you.. read more
i am LiLy

6 Months Ago

thank you so much my friend.....you are lovely

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Added on January 2, 2018
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i am LiLy
i am LiLy

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i'm lost but try to create and express my existence somehow. i feel broken and numb but I write because it stops my life ending. i record sounds and audio that i feel like is somehow between sound .. more..

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