my only fall

my only fall

A Poem by i am LiLy
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poem because my head hurts and i cant take painkillers because of my addiction.....life is s**t.

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I use strawberries and I drink 100% cranberry juice. Stopped my headaches. Native American cure for headaches. Liquid mint on the forehead and some strawberries. I understand the poem. When the head is hurting. No peace. Thank you for sharing your words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I use strawberries and I drink 100% cranberry juice. Stopped my headaches. Native American cure for headaches. Liquid mint on the forehead and some strawberries. I understand the poem. When the head is hurting. No peace. Thank you for sharing your words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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A self-assurance and confidence in knowing yourself, in the dark and light, and accepting yourself for who you are... my takeaway. And, you convey a sharp bitterness, but again with confidence, in assessing others and pointing out their relative little worth in your life. Like your other work, it's raw and pure, which makes it uniquely yours.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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i am LiLy

6 Months Ago

holy crap dude......I think you actually understand in some way .....in a way that you know you don'.. read more
I read this a few times I found it very thought provoking not sure about the yellow of piss, maybe your saying they are ill not sure but I hope you have some sort of hope inside you

Posted 6 Months Ago


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i am LiLy

6 Months Ago

it doesn't mean anything.....it's just words...nothing that even matters at any level or depth in yo.. read more
wow very dark and deep. emotional write as well

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

6 Months Ago

thank you....

I'm just sat here trying to decide if I should leave this group.....as .. read more
simba

6 Months Ago

Don’t leave the group writing is therapy they are what you want them to be please don’t leave
kolipop

6 Months Ago

writing is god therapy, it's how i get through with some of my deep depression issues. when no one e.. read more
I can see what you were trying to go for with Line 7, it's just "weak" and "the yellow of piss" don't really complement each other in that wording. But apart from that one banal aspect, this is profound af!! Are you sure you still do not consider yourself a poet, for you def have the makings of one. You were meant to write these gems, and, golly, you are meant to write much more if you really put your heart to it! Well done!!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

6 Months Ago

yeah....I'm not a poet because I don't care about my words confirming or fitting together in any way.. read more
so dark...the deepest of depressions convinces us of only one solution ...so tragic there are those who can not find the patience to wait three days ..Ann Landers (old time advice columnist) said once that if we wait just three days she guarantees we will not feel the same way about whatever the situation is that caused us such distress .. in fact, she goes on, we may not even remember what the thing was that grieved us so ... i took that advice...it was one of the things that sticks with a person easily ... in three days the "I can't stand its" the "its impossibles" the "nobody knows or cares" thoughts are tempered away .. we can stand it (we have in the past) it is possible ( i have accomplished things i didn't dream i could etc etc... anyway... didn't mean to soap box your poem..but it inspired a lot in me this morning so i say well done indeed
E.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

6 Months Ago

thank you my friend....so much....you are kind

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Added on January 2, 2018
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i am LiLy
i am LiLy

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i'm lost but try to create and express my existence somehow. i feel broken and numb but I write because it stops my life ending. i record sounds and audio that i feel like is somehow between sound .. more..

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