He caged her

He caged her like a bird,
And never let her see, 
The outside of her cage,
And how different life could be.

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

beautifully done with a very good concept... it was short yet very thought provoking... it seems that the girl has been chained by a person who never let her go outside of her little cage to explore the outside world.... very well done.... full ratings.....

[Natalie Semaan]

Thank you :)

[ella morra]

so short but so deep. your writing is beautiful, good work(:

[Wicahpi]

Sad, isn't it, that this happens in real life, too.
Short and to the point in a realistic way.

[Natalie Semaan]

It is sad :(

[Relic's Bare Trees]

It's sad to think someone could be controlled by someone else in such a way. Its the opposite of the way love should be.

And how different life could be. (you already mentioned 'her' in the last line)

[Natalie Semaan]

It really is :( and thanks for letting me know! Ill edit that now :)

[Davidgeo]

Nice writing Natalie Semen. That's pretty good, I like the idea you have. Of the limitations a******s of either gender can put on a person's point of view.

Trapped is a fine word for that.

And it was short while being impactful. You didn't even steal that much of my time.

[Natalie Semaan]

Thank you :)