Popcorn

Realizing someone new or not so new

Sometimes I wonder....

Why I ever really even noticed you that day

What was it that made you

Popcorn into existence

While other times there is

A questioning look

Directed my direction

That has suddenly appeared

Now ever since I noticed

A feeling of the look

Has turned disgusted or disapproving

When I look towards you

What has made you do this so?

i feel eyes lingering in my direction

Tell me... What is on your mind?

Did I pop into your eye line?

Like you popped corned into mine...

Author's Note

Been writing this one for a few days...
Ignore mistakes I am not one for grammar

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice twist of words. I liked them.
"Did I pop into your eye line?
Like you popped corned into mine.."
Thank you Liz for your entertaining poetry.
Coyote

[Lea Walker]

I love it. Very well written. One of the best poems I've read on this website so far.

[Liz Alexander]

I just take your word for it. Thank you for your review!

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

I really liked this piece. Its so out of the norm creative and catchy. I really like the comparison. very good job. Stay inspired.

[Liz Alexander]

Thank you for the review.

[Jamestown]

This is really creative and cute, I enjoyed reading this. Made me smile:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Liz Alexander]

Thank you for the review.