......Goodbye

Parting of lovers

Each of us

Are at home together

............ Dreams of you and me

Dwell in my brian

Forever.......

We both Knew that

This would not last

Your leaving in just a few days

Never to come home agian

As we are spending the last night together

You hold me to your chest

As I cry

You whisper sweet nothing into my ear

Both of us are dreading

The one word we know

We have to say

That I hate............

And it is........

......Goodbye

Author's Note

Ignore grammar
Inspired by: My DayDreams

Reviews

[Sexy P3nguin]

THanks for entering
This poem is so touching. I have had this happen before so I can relate. But enough about me.. The poem gave me the emotion of sadness and a lil happy at the beggining
Great job. Very moving piece

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Awe so sentimentally bittersweet... such simple and pure feeling expressed so beautifully.

[Magdelena]

Ohhh so sweet the passion!!!! I lloved this. For its honesty, of evveryday feelihngs.. Its purity!!! That's what i liked about this!!


Mags xx