You

You

A Poem by Ramblings of a Mediocre Mind
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Because he asked me to write some more, and I couldn't find any better thing to write about than him.

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I love you.
Do you know that?
I'm sure you don't
Because I haven't told you yet.
I'm not sure if you felt it 
But now I'm going to tell you
I love you.
I hope you don't turn away.

You have this wavy blond hair
That I like running my fingers through.
You have these amazingly expressive eyes
That I always get lost in when I look at them.
You're so tall at 6 feet 2
That I feel like I'm a dwarf when I'm standing next to you
You have these muscular arms
That I like holding on to
That I like feeling around me when you hold me close.
I like all these things about you
But these are not the reasons why I love you.

I'm crazy about you
And it's not because you're good looking
(Which you are by the way but don't let it go over your head.)
Or because you have perfectly carved abs.
I'm crazy about you because you're not like the rest.
You are not afraid to show how you feel.
I'm crazy about you because of how you touch me
How you wrap your arms around my waist and hold me close to your body
How you run your warm hands up and down my body
Making me feel all these emotions I never knew I was capable of feeling
How you kiss me on the lips with so much passion and softness
How you cup my face with your hands then brushing my cheeks with so much tenderness.
I am crazy about
How every hug
How every touch
How every kiss
Means a lot more than what it really is
I'm crazy about you because you make me feel how you feel without even saying anything.
I'm crazy about all these things but those aren't the reasons why I love you.

I love you.
I really love you.
Let me tell you why.
I love you because you're sweet
You make me smile without even trying.
I love you because you make an effort to talk to me
Even though you have tons of things to do
You still make time for me
And that really means a lot.
I love you because you respect me
Not just me but everyone around you.
I love that you do not care about my past
That you care not about my mistakes
That you look beyond all of that.
I love that you didn't judge me but instead accepted me wholly.
I love you because you could see the real me
You could see beyond what others could see.
You see me as not just someone imperfect and broken but someone who's beautiful and amazing.
I love that you inspire me to be better
How you could believe in what I can do
How you see that there is so much more out there for me.
I love how you made me feel alive
How you make my heart race every time I am with you
How you awakened a part of me that I thought I already shut away from everyone.
You filled up the missing part of me
You completed me.

I love you.
Do you know that?
By now I'm sure you do.
Because I already told you
I'm not sure if you felt it 
But now I'm going to tell you again
I love you.
I hope you don't turn away.

© 2013 Ramblings of a Mediocre Mind


Author's Note

Ramblings of a Mediocre Mind
I know its not that deep but please leave your comments. :)

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It's very sweet, it's like how good physical chemistry can actually arouse emotions in us. When people say attraction is important, this is really why.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like how it is not too deep. Sometimes light and breezy is nice :) I really enjoyed this :) You are a fantastic writer :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ramblings of a Mediocre Mind

11 Years Ago

Aww thank you! I tried to make it as free flowing as possible. Thanks for reading it.
*On contrare ... It IS deep !!
Really well written and definately describes your love for him and why that is so. You pour out your love for him like only you could. It's beautiful =)


"I love you because you could see the real me
You could see beyond what others could see."


Just amazing !!! Well done =)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on February 24, 2013
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Ramblings of a Mediocre Mind

Quezon City, National Capital Region, Philippines



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