Roots In March

For the "natures Haiku" contest

 

                              

       

                                        Locked in ice prisons
                                   Sleeping roots restless in cells
                                         Soon to be set free       

Reviews

[sushi]

Truly beautiful.....

[Desert Dreamer]

Amazing haiku, so often we are like these roots, waiting for spring to release us.

[Emma Joy]

Beautifu and true haiku with gentle power and amazing thought .. thank you so much for sharing. (The picture is perfect)

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I like this very much. That is what they are doing .. waiting and so am i ..
Beautiful , ice.

Chloe

[Angela]

Ahh beautiful. I could use some spring!

[Chris G. Vaillancourt]

excellent write

[Sunni Davis]

I love the sense of urgency in the Earth in the weeks before spring. You can almost feel the energy of new growth vibrating beneath the surface. Great haiku!

[Narnie]

As you know, I'm not a huge fan of haikus... but then this has the message so beautifully encapsulated and you have taken the form for yourself. Moss, hmmmm, I have curious feelings about moss. I'm not quite sure whether I feel sorry for it or not.

[Rick Puetter]

Dear ice,

Yes, spring! The setting free of the prisoners of winter. It is a jubulent setting free, full of vibrant color and glorous scents.

Nicely captured. Greatly enjoyed.

Best regards,

Rick

[Poeticadia]

Perfect seasonal images, beautiful sounds. I love the word-play on 'cells'... giving this short poetic form even more depth in its brevity. You have truly mastered the art of Haiku.