How Life Would Be

Sometimes I wonder
How life would be
If you weren't you
And I wasn't me
Would it be different?
Or just the same?
Would we exist?
Would I have a name?
Would I wonder these things,
Or leave them to rot.
Down in the dark and the damp of my thought.
I wonder what I would wonder instead.
Would I wonder at all?
Would I be dead?
But we'll never know
How life would be
Since you are you
And I am me.
 

Reviews

[Stardust]

You deserve a golden star for this one. I truly enjoyed reading it, and I adored the ending cause it puts the entire poem together. Nice work! You have a wonderful mind, dear!

[Sophia Moosmann]

Interesting concept to think about all the what ifs.

[Jess Rose]

Thank you so much for reviewing my work!!

[Michael Wright]

Very good overall Nice work

[Jess Rose]

Thanks for the Review!

[Michael Wright]

I do suggest you start to write more Good luck