Cause And Effect

Cause and effect

Oh how the things ive done

Effected me

I kept it all inside

And now im withering away

into nothing

All this pain

I dont know what to do with it

So i spread it to the people i love, around me

When i do that, it pains me more

I've done things in the past

That have scard me, mentally, emotionally, and physically.

Im scared to look out my window

Or even go to school.

So many emotions

Rush in and out through me

Fear and Pain are most greatly.

Im a rocket

Keeping everything inside

But soon ill blow and fly sky high

Revealing everything

But no. 

I wont allow it.

I'll tape my mouth shut

And enclose myself in a padded cell

And let them tie my hands behind my back.

I wont try to escape.

I wont speak to anyone

I'll just live with the pain

Cause

And eventually blow and go insane

Effect

Reviews

[Arsenic Nemesis]

Wow, mortal! Very well written and that last line, that last WORD really very powerful! Very deep, emotional and I love the way that it is set out, and I really liked the title of this piece too, actually, really well thought out - excellent, I must say, keep it up!~

[KAREN]

These are some pretty strong words. Many people can relate to this poem, I can in alot of ways. Sometimes you just can't say anything right so it would be best to keep my mouth shut! very emotional!!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. I do understand the emotion and feelings too. It seem we can't win.
"I'll tape my mouth shut
And enclose myself in a padded cell
And let them tie my hands behind my back."
Took me many years. I keep quiet unless something polite to say. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[bluessadmood]

Ohh this was so nice..
how i first thought of keeping in all the pain and ache all inside
then i will spread ,a little piece to everyone,ha ha
or another way ,i will fill like in a rocket and one day shoot it out
this mind may explode one day and drive me crazy and all around
somehow funny sweet thoughts
again i liked this,if you put a little romance and drama ,i mean more drama in it
it would look even greater,just loved this
lovely write