my 'favorite' teacher
A Poem by
Shapirta
a poem about my teacher
my 'favorite' teacher
as wide as a bleacher
is quite a screecher,
that meany, teacher
© 2014 Shapirta
Author's Note
what do you think?
Reviews
Someone's got roasted in this one!
Posted 7 Years Ago
Haha! I'm almost eleven, and my teacher is really nice but the head.. .
OH DEAR!
Posted 9 Years Ago
Haha! I'm almost eleven, and my teacher is really nice but the head.. .
OH DEAR!
9 Years Ago
I AM ELEVEN!!! =) let's be freinds!!!! (there i spelling it wrong again, but I'm too lazy to fix it).. read more I AM ELEVEN!!! =) let's be freinds!!!! (there i spelling it wrong again, but I'm too lazy to fix it) +) =)
This one made me laugh. It was cute. Made me think of some of the awful teachers I have had in my past. Thankfully the good teachers are usually more plentiful than the bad.
Posted 9 Years Ago
This one made me laugh. It was cute. Made me think of some of the awful teachers I have had in my past. Thankfully the good teachers are usually more plentiful than the bad.
though its different from what I have expected
but is a small pretty piece
Posted 9 Years Ago
though its different from what I have expected
but is a small pretty piece
Funny! I like how my expectations of the poem were so different from what it really was. I actually thought it was about your favorite teacher. Your tone was good. Good job! :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
Funny! I like how my expectations of the poem were so different from what it really was. I actually thought it was about your favorite teacher. Your tone was good. Good job! :)
I had a few of these teachers. Good poem
Posted 9 Years Ago
I had a few of these teachers. Good poem
Cute and funny! I have to say, it's aptly describes my 'fav' teacher too. smart penning.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Cute and funny! I have to say, it's aptly describes my 'fav' teacher too. smart penning.
Short, but I like that it Rhymes.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Short, but I like that it Rhymes.
I like the tone of this poem. Short, but nicely done.
Posted 9 Years Ago
I like the tone of this poem. Short, but nicely done.
Funny. The writer looks beyond external appearances and behaviors to see the quality of a person's dedication. I like this. Great job.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Funny. The writer looks beyond external appearances and behaviors to see the quality of a person's dedication. I like this. Great job.
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Added on September 17, 2014
Last Updated on September 17, 2014
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Shapirta dude hi!, NY
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i recently turned eleven, and for as long as i can remember, have always loved writing. haha wow. now im 12. time flies..
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