Poseidon The Travel Agent

Creative Poetry Group

 

Poseidon god of the sea have mercy on me.

Take your trident and send me on a vacation, a secluded beach where the waves relax me. The vigorous pace of my busy life has shook my insides like an earthquake, crumbling me to exhaustion. Peace and quiet is all I need, nothing but the mysterious sea nymphs singing in their beautiful sirens voices to sooth me. Poseidon, my mature man, can you please help me?

Reviews

[StormCloud]

good job.

[.]

humourous and witty..I wish getting away was that easy

[PoppySilver]

This is packed with mystery and unique style! I loved it hon :) Its a clever piece! And one can't help but wonder what would happen :) One of your best love! xx

[WindSong]

Adventure on the high seas in quest of love and romance, this is what it reminds me! A magical and glorious island of beauty and mystery to soothe her aching heart...a temptress of the sea! Great poem...extremely well written!

[Jibey]

You can't beat a mature man for soothing voices and strength of mind...

[Poetic Beauty]

love this poem. It is fun and the imagery is beautiful. You did a great job with the flow. It is smooth and it makes me want to travel away as well.

[Brad]

careful what you ask for, i hear those greek gods always want something in return...and next thing you know...there's little heroes running around.. :))

[Linear]

Poseidon, take me make me the desire you need me to be
I'll swim with the fishes if you wish me to be
Stroke me gently your trident in hand
Allow your sea spume to wash over me


That's from a woman's viewpoint of course, just seeing where your words would take me.
Enjoyed :0)

[Coyote Poetry]

Ask him make room for me. Would be nice to be able to escape and find some peace from the busy life. I enjoyed this poem. Almost felt like a prayer. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Chris G. Vaillancourt]

You have penned the garden within beautifully here