Ain't No More Loving You Baby

Creative Poetry Group

 

 

 

 

                        

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fools gold words that mean nothing

Mischievous delight frames your features

Fool me once

Fool me twice

But never again

Ain't no more loving you baby

 

Cata Combs of my heart hold many chambers

Pain, anger and remorse step over the

thresh-old, taking up resident

Uncloaking of your personality opens blinded eyes

Ain't no more loving you baby

 

Resentiment smothers my air

Estuary of tears flow into the rising tide

A journey of relinquish she takes

Ain't no more loving you baby

 

Uncanny life is ahead

Reciprocate feelings swing back and forth

Perspire drips with fear

Ain't no more loving you baby

 

Sensual voluptuous cause me to pause

Temptation over rides my thoughts

Your superstitious ways forge me on

Ain't no more loving you baby

 

Heart constricts

A stray tear slids down cheek

Eyes watch you walk out

Words fill my mouth

I'll always love you baby

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

For the creative poetry group, words are in my tag box i had to use!

Reviews

[realmwriter]

What part of the heart loves so deaply that it cannot let go? Even when the damage done is so great that it threatens to rip one apart the broken heart still, cannot let go. I've professed my love to another and still I will love her always because my heart cannot let go. I feal what this piece says at this very moment. Very well done.

Painfully but emotionally strong piece! it sounds like an goodbye song, in my ears, captivated with the perfect flow of honest words.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

A wonderful write, very emotional storyline in this. Very hurting.

[Dream Weaver]

A love you convince yourself is not there
but deep down you know it will always
be there.. Nicely done..Great pic BTW...

[Dark Empress]

Very well written.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Mischievous delight frames your features Pain, anger and remorse step over Estuary of tears flow into the rising tide Reciprocate feelings swing back and forth Temptation over rides my thoughts A stray tear slides down cheek I'll always love you baby. Painful emotions portrayed by one who will always continue to love the player. Well done

[Don Shaw]

Very well written i love it.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. Some decision leave us alone and confused. I like the feel and the emotion in this poem.
"Fool me once
Fool me twice
But never again
Ain't no more loving you baby"
Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[InkSlinger]

Sweet lil' piece of writing.. it has a bluesy feel to it..
It has a great lyrical feel to it..

[Morning Star]

Your words are expressed with great emotion
captured the love and the sadness and emotions when love fades
A lot of heart and soul went into this piece
Outstanding view of thoughts!
Hugssss :)