Hearts Float In Symbolic Tune As Goodbye Blows Off The Wind

Our little one giggles, and it's your voice I hear.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Romance drifts from every corner of our soul

Melodic phrases cleanse the air in tranqulity

Instood of fog evaporating,

hearts float in symbolic tune of our love

We thought the world began and ended with us

 

Nostalgic overwhelms fading happiness

My heart beats of bountiful memories

I watch each one drift like white foamy clouds

off the ocean's horizon

Appreciation of time spent together dampens my cheeks

 

Sea gulls serenade a song in honor of you

Sea salt sensuously touch my lips

Warmth of the sun affectionatly hugs me

Eyes closed, I savor your presence

 

Life's splendor moments with you paint a

portrait of a keepsake

As your ashes flow out to sea,

resoluteness fills my being

Our little one giggles, and it's you I hear

Hearts float in symbolic tune to our love

as goodbye blows off the wind

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Loner]

Amazing as always .... Great job .

[Allen Smuckler]

Jeez, Imagine......overwhelmed by your use of metaphors throughout this beautiful and heartfelt piece...not to mention the ethereal and sensual imagery...
I was truly carried and blown away by the last line...
wonderful write Imagin101
allen

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

I love this poem. Truly emotional and just all in all beautiful

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

the last three lines makes this piece heavenly

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

such a tranquil setting you've painted with your words!
:)

[Coyote Poetry]

"Sea gulls serenade a song in honor of you
Sea salt sensuously touch my lips
Warmth of the sun affectionatly hugs me
Eyes closed, I savor your presence"
A beautiful poem. I like the many strong statements in this poem. A very good ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Brad]

fantastically beautiful, resonates throughout time

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Nicely done. A very positive and romantic poem.

[Enigma]

Brilliant work with imagery and metaphor here - keeping track of an ever-progressive love. Good job! :)

[Mauricio Montoya]

Love at first sight this piece takes me back in time but that’s just me, great job, well done.