STOP THE WAR !

The poem describes about the war that have been going on between Palestine and Israel. The war that happens between of both countries damaging their self also ruins peace in the world

STOP THE WAR !

Dar…. dor…. dar….. dor….

The war has been going on between Palestine and Israel

The war  always takes its toll and make hurt  each others

The innocent people become victims of the shooting

Look at…! a lot of children  lost their families

 

Dar…. dor…. dar….. dor….

The war is really cruel

It also does not recognize affection and love

The war destroys the life of the world

It even ruins peace in the world

 

Dar…. dor…. dar….. dor….

How terrible war occurred in those countries

Hey….! the people who involved in war there

Stop the war!

Keep peace in the world

 

Reviews

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Beautiful lyrics!
A powerful and influential poem on war...
I agree that this inhuman war should be ended soon because it yields nothing but devastation!
A very well written note...
Keep writing

[Jamestown]

I agree with you completely my friend, I do not support the war campaign
at all, I pray that God will step in and give these war mongers a lesson. PTL!

[Muslimah Triyati]

Thanks for read and review of my poem, i wrote it comes from my heart and wish that the war which involved of both countries would be ending.