Silver Droplets

 

Silver

 

oblong shaped

 

tiny cold droplets

 

falling from the sky

 

lands on the ground below

 

encased in puddles, clear

 

glimmering in sunshine

 

spring fresh

 

raindrops

Reviews

[kaylynnmelody♥]

this was a great peice. rain is so beautiful, and it feels like God is cleansing the world. taking care of all the livestock and all His children! Beautiful!

[the_stoic]

in my writes on rain i too have envisioned rain drops as silvery .. so can relate to the attention you have paid into watching the rain droplets and the associated feelings .. glad to have read this mam :)

[Daniel Soloye]

Amazing bravo!

[Mauricio Montoya]

Raindrops create a ripple that slowly fades away. this was rolling in my mind as I read. awesome!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Nice imagery! Excellent Write!

[SilentLullabies]

I love the imagery. I can see it in my mind.

[Ice QueenJen]

Another beautiful poem, and I love how its laid out- just like a tiny water droplet.

[Worms]

great imagery of rain and what it means
very nicely done
simple yet beautiful

[Sunflower 20]

beautifully written! the description brings great imagery ( i pictured a raindrop falling from the sky in slow motion with the sun shining on it)

your poems have a certain subtlety to them, bringing with it a calm, relaxing escape to the world. Great Job!! ^_^

[Linear]

Excellent poem, love the format, a lovely droplet