Someplace I am King

 

trying not to look
trying not to care
trying to act like your not even there
trying? if only that was all it took

it would take an act of god to ignore you
and I am simply a man
without even a leg to stand
so you draw my attention like so few

I don’t think u notice me
I am just a simple guy
no matter how hard i try
that is just how I will always be

I am still allowed to hope
and that is all I seem to do
hoping that I can be with you
even if I look like a dope

but which is worse
hoping for what cant be obtained
or giving up till nothing remained
I don’t suppose i am the first

to have hope for what can not be
in fact the story is as old as it gets
even before ink and paper ever met
but that hope makes me free

she is above me I am told
but you cant censor what i hope for
that is realities true back door
and I will use it and be bold

for in my hopes I am king
even if in reality I am low
meek mild and slow
in my hopes I can give her a ring

even if its only in my head
protect her from everything
give her many reasons to sing
its far better than letting my heart go dead

Reviews

[Alicia Isabella Lane]

This is so beautiful ... I love the feeling of longing it leaves the reader with. The affection held for the subject of this work is expressed with such vivid imagery that it makes you feel those emotions as if they were your own. Amazing job yet again!!!

[Lana123]

no one is above anyone else. Go for it!

[Jaffa Forbes]

cool stuff, know the feeling. nice title!
jaff

[Deseret]

i liked this, it was well thought out and it was obvious that you really felt those things. but sometimes it felt like you were saying things because they rhymed and not because they were the exact word and meaning you wanted to use, i got this impression when you used the word 'dope', of couse i could be completely wrong and that is exactly what you wanted to say. another suggestion i want to give is not using the letter "U" to say you and capitalize the I's that might make you seem a little bit more thought out and mature. you might want to add a picture and not just the default because it will make more people interested. -feel free to ignore all of this if it suits you-