gravedigger

gravedigger

A Poem by imnoromeo215

from the day of your birth
I have been hard at work
scraping away all that lurks
digging your final place on this earth

i do not care about your life
how you died
or how many times you lied
i do not even care about your wife

all you are to me is a hole
just another plot to dig
and a tombstone to rig
digging away like a mole

your life is done
it doesn’t matter who you know
or how much money you throw
i hope those whose holes i have just begun

take heed of his plot
live a full life
do not fear the knife
because in the end all we do is rot

© 2008 imnoromeo215


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wow
this was unexpected
very morbid and sad
you are a very visual writer
so true is the ending
nicely put
thank you for entering my contest

Posted 16 Years Ago


True, brrrrr... chills. Good message here...

take heed of his plot
live a full life
do not fear the knife
because in the end all we do is rot

Nicely put.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow very dark �.. very ominous, quite different style from your other works I have read. I love what a versatile writer you are!!!.


Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

WOW. this stark, visceral and inescapable writing. Real, and raw. And ultimately - chilling because you speak a truth. Well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 25, 2008
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imnoromeo215
imnoromeo215

statesboro, GA



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I am a college kid in statesboro Ga who like to write some from time to time. I have a really bad habit of rambling on about some random point whenever im reviewing someones work lol so please try to .. more..

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