I need an opening line

I need an opening line

A Poem by imnoromeo215

I need an opening line

Now that I think about it this should do fine

No to long not to short

Something easy to retort

Now to fill this poem with romantic words

Maybe something about how you’re like the birds

You need your space

Some where you can hide your face

Hide it from this cruel world

Let it be open and unfurled

But this means being away from me as well

And for me this is truly hell

For I will never get to see u shine

But its ok, I think…. ill be fine

© 2008 imnoromeo215


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hmmm. i hope you will be fine...
cause this was truly awesome. i think that if yo u want to becaome a better your definately on the right track cause this was great.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 27, 2008

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imnoromeo215
imnoromeo215

statesboro, GA



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I am a college kid in statesboro Ga who like to write some from time to time. I have a really bad habit of rambling on about some random point whenever im reviewing someones work lol so please try to .. more..

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A Poem by imnoromeo215