Your nonstop conversations!

Every guy has a girl in his life who hold a special place in his heart. This is about how he feels after she leaves him.

There was a time,
You were the only one I had,
And now when you are gone,
My heart cries and my soul is sad.

All your chats,
and all your calls,
coming to my dreams,
Taking me Into it just like a blackhole.

I hear your voice when I think of you,
I get your flashbacks all the time,
I want to meet you and hug you tight,
I just miss you all day and Night.

The way you said that I was mad,
The way you said that I was a kid,
The way you said each and every word,
Now makes me cry because I cant hear them again.

I have no Idea what I did wrong.
I have no clue how to get you back,
I wanted to make our lives like a Dream,
and since you left my heart just aches.

Author's Note

All of these were written with someone in mind, so if you could also connect please share your how you felt. :)

Reviews

[Raj Sahu]

“There was a time,
You were the only one I had,
And now when you are gone,
My heart cries and my soul is sad.
.....
I have no Idea what I did wrong.
I have no clue how to get you back,
I wanted to make our lives like a Dream,
and since you left my heart just aches."

The above lines are enough to melt a stony heart. Your words are laved with unbearable agony but always you managed to pace forth with your fate.
Life is an intermingling journey of mirth and sorrow. About the composition, it is good. Now, as you are moving ahead, you should add some rhymes and fill your words with the charm of some poetic devices. All the best!

[Tushar Singh]

Thnx. And yes, I will try to add ryhmes. Thnx for your time and words.

[Raj Sahu]

Pleasure...

[Najam Us Saher]

Very painful situation. I know how that feels, just pour your emotions you will feel better.

[Tushar Singh]

I am happy that you understood the situation, that means my words atleast reached you.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Many can relate, but the way you written was splendid. I really liked the second stanza with the black-hole. Tyfs!

[Tushar Singh]

Thank you very much for the appreciation. It means a lot.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome!