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A Poem by Inda
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The elusive truth.

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Your absence

Is loud

And clear.

It’s your

presence,

 your complexity

I fear.

It’s the

word s

you’ve never

said

it is the truth

 I never

hear.


© 2012 Inda



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It is amazing how silence and absence has a sound and how that sound affects us. That kind of loss is one of the deepest we shall know. Death is the longest absence we shall ever know. We don't know what is beyond it or if we will see our loved one again. A thought provoking write indeed.



Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

5 Years Ago

Death is indeed the biggest loss. Glad you liked this piece and thanks for the review.
Clockwork

5 Years Ago

You're welcome



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This was piece was deep and for me... full of truth. Well put my friend.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

5 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you liked it and reviewed.
It is amazing how silence and absence has a sound and how that sound affects us. That kind of loss is one of the deepest we shall know. Death is the longest absence we shall ever know. We don't know what is beyond it or if we will see our loved one again. A thought provoking write indeed.



Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

5 Years Ago

Death is indeed the biggest loss. Glad you liked this piece and thanks for the review.
Clockwork

5 Years Ago

You're welcome
yes, her lack of presence can be deafening and blinding sometimes...wonderfully captured and expressed

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

5 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you liked it and reviewed!
This is very deep and meaningful. How the absence of someone can speak volumes and though we miss them we fear to hear the real truth which is normally that they don't love us or want to be with us as we do them. Nice work

Posted 5 Years Ago


Inda

5 Years Ago

Yep, glad you picked that up. Thanks for the R&R means a lot.
Carolann Dowsett

5 Years Ago

Welcome :)
I understood this one loud and clear. It was short but it had a strong meaning behind it. Good job, Inda.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Inda

5 Years Ago

Thanks, it does have strong meaning. Thanks for reviewing.
Andie

5 Years Ago

No problem!
thats a short one

Posted 5 Years Ago


Inda

5 Years Ago

Yeah sometimes I write short stuff.

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Inda
Inda

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