Remembering Eve

Remembering Eve

A Poem by Inda

She worked at the supermarket,
In the bakery department.
Now she's gone; car crash,
pretty harsh.
I think her name was Eve.
-Yeah, she had a thing for me.

© 2014 Inda


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this one is one of those times I have a shameful, naughty giggle escape.. the tone of this makes me feel like you are trying to be funny.. I may be way off, but caught some humor.. (ok... guess I am the quirky girl who is an oddball jeez)... will go back to my corner.. but yea.. the ending did make me giggle.. shame on you for highlighting my weirdness.. ((hugs))


Posted 9 Years Ago


Inda

9 Years Ago

I was trying to be funny so no need to feel bad. :)
AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

ok good, wheeeew.. my guess is you will have a lot of reviews after this.. lol
Yep, I am the o.. read more
Thanks for the reviews guys lol.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Well I guess we're saying goodbye to Eve then.... Ouchie, Inda.

Posted 9 Years Ago


RIP eve.....................................

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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