-Luna's laughter-

-Luna's laughter-

A Poem by Inda

Night’s foggy,


stars roll out, no longer cloaked


Behind the moonlight.


Very cross,


-Longing for freedom


Rushing like water from a dam.


The river talks, vents.


Pretending the stars where old friends.


 Selene on her chariot,


What barrel of laughs!

© 2017 Inda


Author's Note

Inda
Selene reffers to the greek godess of the moon, often representing the moon itself or having a chariot that pulls the moon. Nicknamed Luna.

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lovely way to use the 10 words!
And Luna is always beautiful!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh I am acquainted with "Selene" and you have penned the "ten" admirably. The last line was a jolt, but it worked so well. Good job! Thank you and good luck with the contest.

Helena

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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