A Love Sonnet

Tried my hand at writing a sonnet.

An everlasting love comes once in

life,

And never dwindles with the sands of

time,

But remains intact through dissent and

strife,

As sweet on the tongue as a drop of

thyme;

Sometimes too pure to seem very

real,

And honest as Angels whispering

true;

All must rejoice in it's fair

appeal

And wonder when you will receive this

too:

An elusive wonder we all call love,

Is it forever reciprocated?

Or can your one love have another

love,

In which your life be culminated?

I'd rather live life with love and

atone,

Than live a life without love, so

alone.

Author's Note

Is it Too wordy towards the end? Any suggestions? Whadd'ya think?