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shout out to all wordsmiths everywhere

behold the RAW power of the word complex and heavy liken to a brick falling from the sky or at some times soft like the painted pouting lips of blonde haired gypsy queens ready to enlighten you're life in the whisper of touch i bow to thee wranglers of wild prose and composers of precice poetics for you art the philospers of rythmn while dually acting as madmen tramps sleeping in alleyways and screaming from rooftops syllabic prescriptions for all to use as needed until the anxiety of exsistance is expelled once and for all in a grand finale of frantic scribbles written in a frenzy by unknown wordsmiths exhailing ingenuios english for this is it the wonder of the written word my only true religion despite style and/or definition anything of value will be written under the moniker "Composition" 

Reviews

[Grant P.]

I would agree with Emma on this one. Your writing would be more appreciated if you added some punctuation so we know when to stop and start. I did like how you gave the day at the church to have a steady flow of events. I liked this part of the poem :"in a grand finale of frantic scribbles written in a frenzy by unknown wordsmiths exhailing ingenuios english for this is it the wonder of the written word my only true religion despite style" I thought the example gave me an image in my mind.

[stephen dillon]

THANX SIR

[stephen dillon]

WELL I AM WILLING TO LEARn so just tell me what to fix i need a good respectable penslicer

[stephen dillon]

so maybe you could fix my puncuaton and actinf as weel as wrdt

[stephen dillon]

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[Gary H]

as you point out in your tags....jazz... thats what this is all about and as you read there are jagged edges and smooth flows that makes this happen.

[stephen dillon]

perfectly understood finally

[emmajoy]

Would have re.read this - and read more of your work, but sadly the spelling spoiled what might have been a great lure into your writing world.