coffee pot thought

coffee pot thought

A Poem by stephen dillon
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i don't even know if i like this but it sounds good when spoken aloud but lets rool wit it

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Awake with eyes sewn shut from left over sleep, thunder raging like a doorbell from the heavens, I’m shivering to the bone as tears fall windswept across my skin. I sip the first cup of caffeinated joy coupled with lungful’s of cancerous smoke signals telling tales of olde Indian spirits forever immortalized in tin cans of screen popping western films / Meanwhile creating heroes out of bloated ten gallon hat wearing and rifle toting lawmen telling all the savages of the wilderness stories of god and Morales while stealing from the world the beauty of living off it instead of simply standing in it.

© 2013 stephen dillon


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stephen dillon
just trying to impress the goods

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I love my coffee. No coffee and no thinking. I like the places you took me with your thoughts. Coffee and some good music. Positive motivation for writing. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

stephen dillon

11 Years Ago

again thanx coyote
Really enjoyed the 'c' alliteration. Works very well. You know you can add spoken word on here somehow. It's either through soundcloud or something like that. Definately would be worth hearing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

stephen dillon

11 Years Ago

thanx i'll try it out

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Added on December 20, 2012
Last Updated on January 13, 2013
Tags: spoken word, coffee
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stephen dillon
stephen dillon

savannah, GA



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