thin lips

thin lips

A Poem by stephen dillon
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i though i'd poke some fun at the writers who overload their work with images for the sake of sounding smart

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“Thin Lips”

Fundamentally overdeveloped phonetics systematically scrohnized into blizzards of syntax, compiled into contrary concerto’s manifested through visions of symbiotic symbolism without concern for mangled legs of literary lions growling at pathetic paramours promoting the neglectful negation of nonsense nouns serving the singular purpose of flexing the musical muscle , expelling this English escape artist from his own crowded classroom, high below the afore mentioned  afterbirth apocalypse spilling out and up the spiral spine of regurgitating readers remaking and renaming but never renewing always hiccup and ha’chewing  snot nosed manifesto pre chewed gum post chewing.

© 2013 stephen dillon


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An impressive write to say the least, it flows without interruption through to the end and paints an intricate portrait. This is definitely my type of poetry, it takes talent to put something like this down and have it flow like you have. Digging it for real.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

stephen dillon

11 Years Ago

thanx alot ,i read some of yore poems as well and in one word perfect



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Oh my god this is great. Your alliteration was fabulous and funny- seriously symbiotic symbolism- how fantastic is that. Yes, and those neglectful negation of nonsense nouns that overwhelm comprehension can be quite a tsunami or as my daughter is fond of saying- words vomited all over the page.

Posted 11 Years Ago


An impressive write to say the least, it flows without interruption through to the end and paints an intricate portrait. This is definitely my type of poetry, it takes talent to put something like this down and have it flow like you have. Digging it for real.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

stephen dillon

11 Years Ago

thanx alot ,i read some of yore poems as well and in one word perfect
English translation:
Sometimes writer's try TOO HARD on the use of perfect rhyme..use of vocabs...syllable counts.....therefore; they lose their message...sadder yet, they lose creative heart.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Say that 5 times fast.

Hilarious. This reminds me of V's speech in V for Vendetta.

I love the alliteration and how you switch it up every 2-3 words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

stephen dillon

11 Years Ago

thanx alot
Damn, that's an eye full of alliteration.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

stephen dillon

11 Years Ago

it's kind of a spoof on the oppisite side of street poets and academic snobs

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Added on January 14, 2013
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stephen dillon
stephen dillon

savannah, GA



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