“Manic” (bi-polaroid android kodachrome catacombs) pt.2

“Manic” (bi-polaroid android kodachrome catacombs) pt.2

A Poem by stephen dillon
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part 2 of cinderblock its basicaily the opposite emotions

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Reawakened by falling through dreams of renewable and endless knowledge brought me to a room where a strong   Smell of Sunday morning is slowly copulating with the salt entering the air like music, a sizzling orchestra crescendos with a drum roll of breaking skin signaling through the unknown to make believe in myself to be equally bronzed like the statue of male perfection bred to leave an exquisite corpse makes me one content hog

© 2013 stephen dillon


Author's Note

stephen dillon
read cinderblock first please

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nice flow man....good one

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

stephen dillon

11 Years Ago

thanx
I imagined hearing it read at a poetry jam in my favorite cafe. It flows so well, and I can picture it in my mead as I read it. Wonderful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

stephen dillon

11 Years Ago

thanx thats what i wanted
what a way to follow up on cinderblock
I did not expect it to end with those lines...truly crafty
sunday morning the smell of it great details
thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

stephen dillon

11 Years Ago

thanx ppl were asking for verse 2 so i had to do it
I didn't expect the ending one content hog. You do a nice job on the images. Good job.


Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on March 13, 2013
Last Updated on March 13, 2013
Tags: reawakened, knowledge, endless, statue, man, make, belive, skin, sunday, morning

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stephen dillon
stephen dillon

savannah, GA



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