Lament

Lament

A Poem by MCS



Tangled through me

chaos overwhelms the core

after a long sleepless night

 

As the world sleeps

here on this lake as the sun rises

a lonely soul seeks peace



~ Mississauga Lake, Kawartha Lakes  


© 2017 MCS



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Ty
The words more vivid than the accompanying image.

Posted 3 Months Ago


MCS

3 Months Ago

Thank you your words are appreciated
Very BEAUTIFUL write here,
very awesome

Posted 3 Months Ago


MCS

3 Months Ago

Thank you for those kind words
I'm no one really

3 Months Ago

no problem
Breathtaking image and poem of searching & solitude so well- written. " A lonely soul seeks peace" - introspective, exquisite line. Wonderful!

Posted 3 Months Ago


MCS

3 Months Ago

:) thank you so much
"Tangled through me
chaos overwhelms the core"

Using "tangled" and "chaos" is genius - minimum words to describe a restless, questioning soul. I salute you, word-slayer!

Posted 3 Months Ago


MCS

3 Months Ago

CC, I thank you for reading and being so kind with your comment.

parfois, c'est bon si la seule chose que vous avez faite aujourd'hui a été respirer.
il est toujours bon de réfléchir en prenant une pause très nécessaire

Posted 3 Months Ago


MCS

3 Months Ago

Je sais que vous comprenez.
That took me away to the lake, forgetting about the troubles of my dreams and the problems of today. Just seeking peace, just enjoying the serenity. Thank you for sharing, I enjoyed where it took me for such a small poem.

Posted 3 Months Ago


MCS

3 Months Ago

I'm delighted to hear that, thank you so much for those kind words.
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MCS
Sometimes it’s okay if the only thing you did today was breathe.

Posted 3 Months Ago



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MCS
MCS

Toronto, (GTA), Canada



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